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©2009 =Zhang-Zheng
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Melancholy

The model is my brother.

Lightsources: daylight from the window on the back, and a reflector on the front.

Actually my first good shot with my reflex, a few days after I purchased it.

for :iconmasterwks: 's Emotion Contest

Comments and critiques are warmly welcomed, as long as you don't diss the model! Thx!

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Ok now a bit of self-critique:
hair is a bit too dark, losing details. Right part of the background is just ugly. There is dust on the glasses. Left part maybe too blown out...


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This work has been featured in the club journal. :)
:iconfrederik21st:
very interesting photo, i like it.
something about your self-criticism - the dust on the glasses is barely seen in that size and the hair is pretty well that way, bringing contrast for the image. i agree for the right part of the background, though. and i think the focus could have been deeper, so that the hand would be focused too.

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Thank you for your opinion.

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Canon EOS 450D
1/20 second
F/2.8
50 mm
400
May 2, 2009, 7:47:22 PM

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